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中考英语作文全解析:亲人朋友类  

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中考英语作文全解析:亲人朋友类

写作指导

四、亲人朋友类

1、父爱如山!假设父亲节即将来临,请你借此机会给你父亲写封信,和他谈谈心里话。

写作要点:

1)父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活;

2)父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲鼓励我笑对生活;表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。

一、题目要点:

题目要求考生在父亲节来临之际表达对父亲的爱和对父亲的感谢。文章要求有两个要点:第一是父亲为了让我接受更好的教育和享受更好的生活,工作很辛苦;第二是父亲既对我严格要求又对我关心鼓励。基于以上两点在父亲节来临之际对父亲的感谢和祝福。

二、写作提纲:

为了写好这篇作文,我们首先列出以下的提纲:

第一步:Tell your father that you know he works very hard.

第二步:Tell your father you know how much he loves you.

第三步:Thank your father and send your wishes to him.

三、语言组织:

用自己最真实的感情去组织语言,表达自己对父亲的感谢和祝福。参考词汇和句型:work hard, be strict with, encourage sb. to do , smile at life, healthy and happy forever, Thank you for…等等。组织语言的同时,要尽可能地用自己和父亲间的真实经历向大家展现父爱的伟大。

Dear father,

Father's Day is coming. I'd like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. Whenever I fail an exam, you encourage me to be confident and keep trying. When I have problems in life, you always tell me to be brave and keep smiling.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Father's Day!

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear father,

I want to say something to you on the special day.

There is a lot of love around me, but I will never forget your love. You always help me when I meet difficulty. I remembered that at the beginning of Grade Nine, I was poor at physics. When you heard this, you had a talk with me. You encouraged me not to lose heart and also helped me with my lessons. You told me "Where there is a will, there is a way." From then on, with your help, I became so interested in study that I made great progress. After that, I made much progress in physics.

Thank you for your love and your help. I will do my best to give all my love to others.

Yours,

Li Hua

2、你国外的朋友Jason想了解你们的英语老师,请根据下表提示用英语写一篇题为"My English teacher Laura"的短文。

Laura

Appearance Nationality England

Age 29

Personality Kind---get along well with all the students

Strict---students well-behaved in class

Patient---deal with questions

Creative---teaching style is different from that of others

Evaluation(评价)

一、题目要点:1、个人基本情况(姓名:国籍:英国;年龄:29 2、人物性格:善良、严格、有耐心、有创造力;3、表现出这些性格特点的事例;4、你对她的评价。

二、写作提纲:这篇书面表达的提纲即为上面的表格。

My English teacher Laura

Laura, my English teacher, is from England and is about 29 years old. She has blond hair and she always wears a pair of glasses on her nose.

She is strict with us in our study, so all the students are well-behaved in her class. Although she is strict, she can get along well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. Whenever we have difficulty in English learning, she will help us to deal with the questions. We all like her lessons very much. That's because she is very creative. Her teaching style is quite different from that of the others. She prepares he r lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. In class she always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.

In a word, I think she is one of the best English teachers I have ever seen. We all love and respect her.

 

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